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She sliced into her skin, tears streaming down her face. She looked up at her ceiling, covered in glow-in-the-dark stars. She marveled at them, then looked down at her butchered thighs and  wrists. She heard the door creak open, and saw him come in. His eyes widened, taking how she was covered in her own blood, still holding the box cutter. She fell to her side and lay bleeding on the carpet. He rushed over to her and gathered her in his lap, still sitting on the floor. She gave a weak smile up to him and asked:
  "Am I beautiful yet?"
©2004-2010 ~DarkAngel19
:icondarkangel19:

Author's Comments

wrote this last night. i was a bit angry...and then my mind started to wander...as it usually does when i am alone...

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:iconblackmoonfaery:
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holy fuck... that's amazing. but oh my goddess...

that's awful....

oh my goddess..........

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~Beat me, bleed me, bend me, tease me. all i know is that no matter what you do to me, i'll still love you.
~Lightning is so beautiful and yet so violent at the same time, a balance as with a lot of things, like the feeling between us when we make love.
:icondarkangel19:
heh, thanx? lol.

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This is how it works
You're young until you're not
You love until you don't
You try until you can't
You laugh until you cry
You cry until you laugh
And everyone must breathe
Until their dying breath
:star: :music: :tunes: :ahoy:
:iconblackmoonfaery:
hehhehhe... nice kay...

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~Beat me, bleed me, bend me, tease me. all i know is that no matter what you do to me, i'll still love you.
~Lightning is so beautiful and yet so violent at the same time, a balance as with a lot of things, like the feeling between us when we make love.
:icondeekaee:
thats powerful. I like it a lot.
:iconvincentvalkier:
Gets right to the point, and packs a punch.... this one's a fav.

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I am the heretic who cannot be burned
:iconkayzangel58:
i am lost for words. seriously. :+fav:


[and believe me that's a good thing. it's an amazing piece]
:iconmakeshiftsoul:
O_O

wow.

this is just...wow

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Dream forever
:iconromav:
It's beautiful - er, bad use of words, huh? I think I prefer it as prose, though.

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~FantasyWritersUnited ~AsThouWilt ~writeaway *ProsePlease *VisualLit ~WordCount ~LitFFS ~literatureODD
:iconfallenrain27:
*jaw drops and eyes widen* wow KT... just.... wow..... i think i must fav this one.....

:glomp:
~em

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a note from Dominic Monaghan:
And try and be really nice to peole who are taller than you. taller people are always tired from being in a higher atmosphere and can hurt you easier, with stronger hands, fingers,
and nails.....maybe.


so HA!
:iconxxkinkyxx:
I found this on today's favorites in poetry. I love this! I'm adding it to my favorites!

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